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by Chloe Sanders

Fallen into the frozen water
It coats my body
Freezing me to the core
But inside there is a soul of steel
A fighting soul
One that will never heal
The one that will never allow
the last coal in the fire
to go out
It will nurse it
Give it oxygen
And hope it grows


Posted on 11/18/2010
Copyright © 2021 Chloe Sanders

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 11/18/10 at 12:54 PM

A nice write lady. Look at what you do each day. At the end what have you learned but more importantly what have you felt. What colors have you seen, what wind have you touched, know the brain but feel the heart. Keep the soul alive regardless of the ups and downs. It is worth the trip.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/18/10 at 07:30 PM

A lovely snapshot. Nice work.

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