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water of winter as water whorled as ice
by Jim Benz
the sound
of no sound falling
midnight snow
...
wet feet in cold boots
deep winter
...
in this world
of drifted snow, my lawn
looks pretty good
11/16/2010 Author's Note: four haiku
Posted on 11/16/2010
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by E. A. Pugh on 11/17/10 at 03:32 AM I must say your poem gave me a smile at the end. I love the long title for a short poem. Well done. ☺ |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/17/10 at 03:04 PM At this time of year in Myrtle Beach my lawn just says the days are too short to work at growing and take a long nap unitl spring rains wake it. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/18/10 at 09:26 PM All of it rocks. |
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