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by Jim Benz

this nameless passion
swirling
in the autumn wind
unlike fate
escapes me

11/08/2010

Posted on 11/08/2010
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

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Posted by Laura Doom on 11/09/10 at 12:07 PM

Would giving it a name bring it down to earth? Is this tanka territory? Whatever the form, if form it is, your writing renders the abstract virtually tangible.

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