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rebound

by Ulyss Rubey

He took from you
a heavy toll-
dark road you
can't forget.
You suck the spirit
from my soul
to reconcile
his debt.

10/31/2010

Posted on 11/01/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ulyss Rubey

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/01/10 at 01:22 PM

...uhhh, ok. got this one down on paper before it slipped away...wonder how many're still out there, with extra souls. too many questions w/out a cup o' joe. good 'un, ulyss.

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 11/01/10 at 02:55 PM

I pictured this in many ways...and the one that most makes any sense is two glasses side by side. the one on the left (she) half full and the one on the right (you) completely full, and pouring from right into left. relationships are an exchange of water, and seemingly only when both glasses are full are they to work best...~JPP

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/01/10 at 03:02 PM

Quick, clever and very nicely written.

Posted by V. Blake on 11/01/10 at 06:22 PM

Everything about this is fantastic. I'm always impressed to see this much said with so few words. Thanks for this one.

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