Very Soon by Alison McKenzieMy life is slim,
A thin line between realities,
A single puff of smoke in the wind,
Anorexic.
I am not my life.
For one thing,
I am fat.
I am also not my body.
And since I am currently
Not connected to much more than
My life or my body,
I’d like to ask
The Powers that Be
For an upgrade, please;
Some place where I can
Stretch my legs,
Drink some complimentary champagne,
And arrive before the rush.
Things will smooth out, I’m sure
My soul will dance very soon –
Yes, very soon.
10/27/2010 Posted on 10/27/2010 Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Colleen Sperry on 10/27/10 at 02:44 PM interesting concept you crafted here |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/27/10 at 03:34 PM That fifth stanza is just brutal, stunning work. Amazing write. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/27/10 at 03:55 PM ...ali, "thin line between realities"...i, too love your visions, saying the unsayable. touche! |
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