The build-up in this is second-to-none. It moves so perfectly those last two lines have all the punch they could ever hope for. Fantastic.

...ditto what gabe said, reminds me of a c/w line: she hit me with a left and right 'cause all i saw was her taillights. yeah on the summers that're gone.

I really like this - you seem to move in themes - a bundle of this wonder or that cunnundrum, sorted out in your mind and work over a space of time, this work is powerful for it's use of startling imagery and a feeling like explsions, but controlled - I want to use the word stuccadoed but don't know how to spell it - "Intoxicating, vandalizing, waste And above all selfishness Time is ticking closer here to meet you once more But I can’t I don’t think I can do it Tick tock Is that your car pulling around the corner? I have to leave" Searing imagery .... beautiful use of vandalizing ...

Sad memory leaving one with a sense of loss--not wanting it repeated! Uncertainty, timidity, and a sense of guilt come through to me.