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Unrealized
by Racquel Cervantes
Like a festering fungus
against spoiled roots the
child weans itself from
the cracks of its own skin.
Turning and twisting into
new growth unrealized,
inseparable from the
cries of morning.
10/20/2010 Author's Note: experimenting with a new style.
Posted on 10/20/2010
Copyright © 2025 Racquel Cervantes
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/20/10 at 07:41 PM Seems to be working so far. Not bad at all. |
| Posted by V. Blake on 10/21/10 at 03:53 AM I'd have to call it a success as well. Gotta love a poem that can blow you away in ten lines or fewer. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/22/10 at 04:24 PM Stripped and unaddressed; and it does concentrate the mind on essentials -- I appreciate the style. |
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