| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 10/09/10 at 06:52 AM "like the unsmoked cigarettes
riddled about my patio
the questions
still smolder" Quite awesome, Steve. Welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 10/09/10 at 06:54 AM Vince stole my favourite line comment...nevertheless, it bears repeating -you've got some really creative imagery here and I look forward to seeing what else you share with us! Welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/09/10 at 01:45 PM ... well done... welcome to Pathetic..... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/09/10 at 04:40 PM Great ending. Welcome indeed. |
| Posted by Andrea Colton on 10/15/10 at 06:16 AM I can see a pretty vivid scenario here...I think everyone has at least one of those days where you pace around and look at your eyes in the mirror trying to find the person you once were or were supposed to be? I dunno. Long story short, I feel ya brother lol |
| Posted by Sarah Wolf on 10/16/10 at 03:06 AM I really love the end |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/24/10 at 07:19 AM All I can say is ditto. Oh, and welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/01/11 at 05:50 PM Welcome! I lived in NC-loved Caroliner blue. reat imagery- well crafed. |
