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"Trip"

by Max Phineas

"Let's go somewhere."
I said as I climbed beneath
the sheets, (already warm from
where she rested) wrapping my arms around her waist.

She closed her eyes, and leaned into
me, murmuring into my chest.

"I am somewhere."

09/16/2010

Posted on 09/16/2010
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/16/10 at 07:02 PM

A nicely written snapshot. Well done.

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 09/16/10 at 08:24 PM

:) like how this wrapped around

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/17/10 at 10:21 AM

...way cool, max.

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