Sitting uncomfortably?
Penitence?
A quirk of inconvenience
so I'll begin
to pass the time
imagine splash of waterfall
a nymph in thrall to nature's call
that turned your nectared words to whine.
A miracle? It goes to waste
impression's mellowed hues refract
the misty gleam of cataract
relieves me of your aftertaste
and sublimates my jaundiced view.
first flush of spring lustrates illusion --
absolution in ablution
Conceit, I wash my hands of you.
Whole
02/18/2008
Author's Note: I blame Jim. Turning this stuff on myself lowlights one of of of of of of of my many deficits by excess :>)
...this Jim of whom you speak, does the live around here or ride a bicycle...a crazyily wonderful write, like a whip-o-lash, i hung on...got scared 'cause you made me see me.
Without bold "across" sublimated via "uncomfortably" knocked between first concerning "penitence" through "inconvenience" despite "A of ... me of your" save (except regarding) "of / in" for plus inside of like near minus, maybe? [i.e. etc etc]