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One Two Three for 911

by A. Paige White

Prayers
counted low
Ground Zero rises

09/11/2010

Author's Note: hay(na)ku
website for more info given on the tadpole forum:
http://www.baymoon.com/~ariadne/form/haynaku.htm {Thanks Jim!}

Posted on 09/11/2010
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/11/10 at 10:17 PM

...Paige, rises buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut as abomination of idiocy. love it as a poetic verse, please tell me that you mean it in a Christian way...got no time for the M-word.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/14/10 at 10:55 PM

Each person will bring her/his own experience to this haiku. Surely lots of prayer afterward. Perhaps a sad commentary on our society.

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