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Narcissist.

by Andrea Colton

Narcissist.

I am

inordinately fascinated

with the dimples at the

top of

thighs. Yes,

thighs in general but

mostly mine.

09/08/2010

Author's Note: I don't even know...so don't ask. Just a thought that came my head, and that was that.

Posted on 09/08/2010
Copyright © 2025 Andrea Colton

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Aaron Michael on 04/01/11 at 04:43 AM

I don't think the title fits. If it did, you wouldn't even know there were other thighs out there. Only yours ;) I think if you took out the capitalization and rearranged the lines slightly, you could have an e.e. cummings-like work on your hands :) Just a thought. Like I always tell you, I like it how you do it, but that doesn't stop me from getting crazy ideas.

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