Lost by Keith D Allison The water don't move whispers in the mountains fell the tears Does the eagle fly the leafs do fall oh hear the cry an’t got no money always knew deep within I spend the last days alone Oh this pain Lost my SOUL the dark river flows The gift a star in the sky the Sun bringing warmth The dream oh the dream ooooof Life lost 09/07/2010 Posted on 09/07/2010 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/07/10 at 05:43 PM In the first stanza this is a beautiful idea/image: "...whispers in the mountains fell the tears..." Reminds me just a little, of cowboy poetry...and I mean that as a compliment. Yet, here there's something unsettling, a deeper cut, if you will. Delighted. Thanks. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)