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Flowers, the summer sun fades

by Keith D Allison

The aluminum horse wait to taste the mountain trail
To feel the breeze of the afternoon.
the mind
drifts on the Internet currents hoping for a moment of muse

Are the days of wonder,
of butterflies,
the awkward moments
from the cocoon,
ALL past
is there no song to sing,

silence,
a moment to share.
An e-mail
no whit
no charm

just a quiet breeze,
hi,
how are you, and I'll be gone

a wind
a lonely wind
am I

08/07/2010

Posted on 08/07/2010
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/07/10 at 10:09 PM

"...a wind/a lonely wind/am I..." What a way to wrap this poem up...the brevity lends a perfect solitary voice to the lonesome wind...beautiful. Delighted. Thanks.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/08/10 at 02:23 AM

... excellent.....

Posted by Krystall Vega on 08/08/10 at 11:33 PM

What a great write..I too love the last 3 lines. Thanks for the read.

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