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"Look For Me First in a Crowded Room"

by Max Phineas

You told me that once.
The problem is I see you
Everywhere you aren't.

08/07/2010

Author's Note: This is the first I've written since the poetry class that took my soul. Wish I could say the title is mine, but it's taken from a movie. It's not much of anything; I'm just glad to have started again.

Posted on 08/07/2010
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/08/10 at 02:24 AM

... brilliant.....

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