|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/29/10 at 11:05 AM|
...krystall, this is wayCool!
|Posted by George Hoerner on 07/29/10 at 01:07 PM|
Every thing in life can be mundane. Anything is only important if we make it so as you have in this write. Living and dying are just pauses along the way.
|Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/29/10 at 03:03 PM|
Ah, this reminds me so much of my own stoplight daydreams...but you put it so eloquently and succinctly I'm willing to admit if i put what I'm thinking in words, i couldn't do better than these. Good write, Krystall!
|Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 07/29/10 at 03:05 PM|
i love the spontaneousness felt in this piece. It's a dreamy pause in reality. Very nice Krystall.
|Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/30/10 at 11:59 PM|
hopefully you only dream at the stop lights. hahaha. this piece is really too cool.
|Posted by Carol Grant on 08/03/10 at 04:17 AM|
wonderfully put. Strong ending. Kept me reading til the end.
|Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 10/21/12 at 06:33 PM|
A very well distilled snapshot of human longing. It is our right to yearn. Well done.
|Posted by Richard Vince on 05/26/20 at 08:37 AM|
there's a beautiful serenity about this that makes the end hit all the harder. great stuff.