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Weight
by Joe Cramerthe weight of the night
hangs heavily, oppressively
upon my shoulders.
The pale moon adds to this,
as if in remiss
within its paleness 10/29/2009 Posted on 07/23/2010
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/24/10 at 12:59 PM I think this might be one of my favorites of yours. It's short, but it knows just where to hit and how hard. Wonderful stuff. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/25/10 at 05:18 PM I think we all remiss for our do's and are don't's. Also I think, judging by the number of poems you've written, that you've entered this world many times. Another nice one Joe. |
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