the garden

by Ronald A Pavellas

the seed
the earth
the water
the root
the leaf
the sun
the air
the flower
the bee
the seed
the earth

is this truly my garden?


Posted on 07/21/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ronald A Pavellas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 07/21/10 at 04:08 AM

I'd say this minimalist style suits you quite well, Ron. The zen-like feel to this poem effectively reflects the true nature of existence. I especially like the cyclical transformation and the way it moves from birth, life, suffering, death and re-birth. Oh, to be a flower in your garden.

Posted by George Hoerner on 07/21/10 at 12:45 PM

Yes, this is an excellent write with a great story. And yes, it is your garden but not alone. It is everyone's garden for we should all tend to living and things and help bring them to fruition. Again well done.

Return to the Previous Page

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)