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if my head (a cloud)

by Peter Hsu

if my head (a cloud)
then you (the cold)
to wring the moisture from my mind

slow snow
drifts from my lips
and so silently floats
downward to embrace the earth

(even the dead
sit up
and take notice)

07/20/2010

Author's Note: words (snow)

Posted on 07/20/2010
Copyright © 2025 Peter Hsu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tom Goss on 07/24/10 at 04:44 PM

Great economy and flow!

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