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jasmine breathes an aura

by Linda Fuller

jasmine breathes an aura
of hearth and ardor
ripening to a heady grog.
glimpsed through rime:
eucalyptus moon.

listen as the bandicoot
utters a plaintive who am I
I harbor a suspicion
she is my anima.

born of and into gloom
our bodies leak plasma
raining like mystics
ground into dust
eagerly cupping a cube
soaked in sugar.

07/11/2010

Author's Note: I believe this is a double acrostic.

Posted on 07/11/2010
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 07/12/10 at 12:18 PM

Ah but I see beyond the gloom there is one who dreams or should. The world was made for discovery and you write as if you know it's there.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/12/10 at 10:52 PM

... excellent.....

Posted by Tom Goss on 07/14/10 at 06:08 PM

I really like the feel of this one, though I'm not smart enough to figure out the acrostics.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/14/10 at 11:53 PM

Sweet, chaotic, and visual. I think he would have liked this --in any language. :)

Posted by Jim Benz on 08/01/10 at 04:42 PM

I think, of the two, I like this Borges acrostic the best. Argentina master indeed ...

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