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I read your mind dyslexically

by Linda Fuller

I read your mind dyslexically it seems
true empathy’s an alqhadet away
I only understand you in my dreams

Your syllables burn cold as blackhole beams
irradiate me briefly, then decay
I read your mind dyslexically it seems

Asleep, white water rafting on the streams
of consciousness, our grey cells splash and play
I only understand you in my dreams

The Book of You: its labyrinthine schemes
the gilt-edged pages of your brain display
I read your mind dyslexically it seems

Your muddled whispers escalate to screams
a soft intention wanders, goes astray
I only understand you in my dreams

Our discourse falls away in raveled seams
the devil advocates and joins the fray
I read your mind dyslexically it seems
I only understand you in my dreams

07/05/2010

Author's Note: Villanelle

Posted on 07/05/2010
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/05/10 at 07:04 PM

"true empathy’s an alqhadet away "...a lance of words to describe my feelings upon reading this, this is too cool...you got the book ends to a life...sandwiched here. ;-0

Posted by Therese Elaine on 07/05/10 at 09:29 PM

So now I get to be the simpering fool and simply say that this blew me away -some of these lines are so perfect that they hurt...and another fancy format that I have yet to try!!!

Posted by Nichole Fuji on 07/06/10 at 05:05 AM

awe-some write. "i read your mind dyslexically" instantly intrigued me and through reading... is stuck in mind like bubble gum popped. and I'm ok with that =)

Posted by Roger J Kenyon on 02/05/11 at 07:13 PM

One fine, villanelle Linda with a catchy title. "A" plus in my books.

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