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Ripples//To Be Human
by Anita MacAn ingredient of
turmoil & touching—
and a Whole Greater.
Cause and Carry and Affect.
Maybe my Soul
is just Jottings and Drawings
with unknown potential.
Cause and Carry and Affect.
Life is Cause
and all else, affect.
Cause and Carry and Affect.
07/04/2010 Author's Note: It's been a while since I posted a solo piece, I thought it was time. This is so drastically different from the first draft, but I think it's got more to it this way.
Posted on 07/04/2010
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/04/10 at 05:56 PM anita i love this, "Maybe my Soul
is just Jottings and Drawings
with unknown potential." |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/05/10 at 06:51 PM I'd be curious to see that first draft, but I love what you've got here. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/08/10 at 08:27 PM I love this. The repition is wonderful. You certainly made your point. Thanks for sharing- brilliant work! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/09/10 at 01:57 AM The whole is greater than the sum of its parts. What we are made of matters less than what we do with what have. Many different ways I take this... makes me think. Great read. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 07/18/10 at 11:38 PM 'Affect' being the root of humanity? This draft is, I guess, the effect. Ahh -- contemplation... |
| Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 07/31/10 at 05:31 AM I love how the title plays with that second to last stanza. Good write! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/22/18 at 09:52 PM There is so much potential in almost everything it makes my mind nearly explode lady, Hope all is well! |
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