| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 07/04/10 at 02:20 AM Here I am standing on Ellen's shoulder to better see what I love most. Tremendous thoughts condensed into Haiku AND ABCDarian at that. Love it. Only someone who has tried these disciplines can fully appreciate the beauty you have bloomed here.
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| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/06/10 at 06:59 PM Gorgeous. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/29/10 at 01:04 PM I really like this for many reasons - the "ghostly home in June" line can imply different things and the added abecedarian touch is so cool. Well done! |
| Posted by Robin Patterson on 09/19/14 at 03:41 PM I love the imagery this evokes! Great Haiku! |
