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by Uriel Tovari ate the world today
and spit out the stem
sugar coated dreams
stuck to the tops of my teeth 06/25/2010 Author's Note: not finished
Posted on 06/25/2010
Copyright © 2026 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/26/10 at 07:23 PM I hate it when that happens. Excellent work. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 06/27/10 at 01:58 AM I thought I ate the world already...hmmm, what did I eat then?! =/ |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/27/10 at 01:02 AM Your teeth may rot. The world can't be healthy for you. Unless you ate the Utopian version leaving us with reality. If that is the case, then you may become a idealist --then someone may eat you. ;) |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 02/26/11 at 12:42 AM Startling and bold. An excellent combination, with wonderful images. |
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