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NotePad

by Jeffrey Parren

What if life
was a bit of text
written in notepad?

A few scribbles
here and there
and thoughts jotted
without precision
until the right words
find each other.

Then simply starting
a new file
and taking the best
of the first
then
not saving the changes
and forgetting
it ever happened.

06/25/2010

Posted on 06/25/2010
Copyright © 2025 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 06/25/10 at 07:19 PM

I like this Jeffrey and I believe there is more truth in than appears on the surface. I doubt we will be remembered long after our death. I also think most of us take bits and pieces of our memory to make up new memories as we retell the stories of our life. Nice write sir.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/25/10 at 07:58 PM

...really tight, like George says...more than meets the eye.

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