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Haiku - Summer Snow

by William Teo

Summer snow
melting in the heat
Transient love

06/14/2010

Posted on 06/14/2010
Copyright © 2024 William Teo

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 06/14/10 at 03:54 PM

I love the ending line! "Transient love" is a totally kickass ending to this one. (forgive my enthusiasm, I'm working on it :D)

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