Author's Note:
"tell me that you'll open your eyes"
Posted on 06/12/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by V. Blake on 06/12/10 at 06:51 PM I see the title as a summer's day, I look outside and note the beautiful weather, and I even got a chuckle out of that third line. I was all prepared for a bright, nostalgia-inducing kind of poem, and all of a sudden I was blindsided by the blues. This poem has teeth. P.S. I am still alive. |
Posted by Anita Mac on 06/14/10 at 03:14 AM ... Actually fairly well suits the New England weather. That acceptance... ugh. (Though, well written, bien sur.) |