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june ninth

by Ava Blu


there becomes a place inside me
that no one can penetrate

and it sighs deeply,
it dies gently
and there isn't much left for me to do.

06/10/2010

Posted on 06/10/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/10/10 at 02:26 PM

Despite the ache, this is beautiful...

Posted by George Hoerner on 06/10/10 at 05:09 PM

This is a very nice write lady. But I beleive the spot begs for someone, quite probably someone you've yet to meet, who you might love to hear him or her say, "I'm here to listen to what you have buried in that impenetrable spot. If you will let me listen."

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