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june seventh

by Ava Blu


there is no point
there is no point
there is no pointthere is no pointthereis
no point

thereisnolongerapointtoanyofthis.

06/07/2010

Posted on 06/07/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/07/10 at 08:56 PM

It's poetic repetition of the best kind. Your attention to style is quite stunning, even in such a simple piece.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/08/10 at 02:37 PM

Pointing is usually a bad thing anyway. Leave pointing to hunting dogs and just write poetry. It is kind of ironic that you have a period at the end of the poem. It's a point. A subtitle could be pointsetta. Gotta go. I have an apPointment. ;)

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