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june sixth

by Ava Blu


you come for what you need,
who the hell knows what you actually want

and i was standing there
i am always left standing
there.

06/07/2010

Posted on 06/07/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/07/10 at 03:28 PM

There's a very real shot of anger in this, but what makes it so great is how that anger comes across in several different ways. You can take it as a late-night mumble or a howl that promises to shatter every window in the house. It's great.

Posted by JJ Johnson on 03/15/11 at 08:30 AM

For me this feels like frustration and sadness, but then that's a reflection of how I feel pretty much all the time. This is what makes great poetry a work of art. Being understood completely in completely different ways and being just as good to each reader.

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