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Thin

by Joe Khan

The death of a shadow
brought on by clouds
of sin.
Opening the mouths
of skies,
swallowed thin.

06/05/2010

Posted on 06/05/2010
Copyright © 2025 Joe Khan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/06/10 at 05:19 AM

For such a short piece, this is amazingly visceral...and vaguely unsettling...I'm impressed -and I look forward to reading more.

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