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Snail Tracks (Haiku)

by Linda Fuller

Glistening snail tracks
traces of meandering
stunned crisp by the sun

06/04/2010

Posted on 06/04/2010
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/04/10 at 12:21 PM

The last line makes the reader sit up, raise eyebrows, and take note...defining quality of a really good haiku!

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