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a cluttered goban (haiku)

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

the stones
clutter the goban
- like drops of rain

06/03/2010

Posted on 06/03/2010
Copyright © 2019 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David Maurice on 11/05/12 at 02:30 AM

I enjoyed, however traditionally haiku has each line interconnected to each other while standing alone by itself, so the last line could perhaps be reworked to rid the 'like' thanks for the read.

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