From a verbal standpoint the beginning "b's" make the reading rapid from the start and contribute to the overall flow. The repetition of "she" also makes the poem speak. Lest we forget the meaning, which I think we have all gone through. ~JPP
Off to a pretty brilliant start. Sounds like June will be a month of ghosts. There's definitely a weird kind of phantom quality to the words and image found in this. I love it, at any rate.