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bargaining with the gods

by Ava Blu



05/25/2010

Posted on 05/25/2010
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Johnny Crimson on 05/25/10 at 05:06 PM

And why should you? I enjoyed this. :)

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/26/10 at 06:17 PM

Just when I think you can't completely terrify me anymore, you come up with something like this. It's a terror in the very best sense of the word for a poet or poem. It shakes, breathes and completely jolts the reader out of their comfort zone. It does this with ridiculously skillful imagery (that third to last stanza? wow). It's a flawless bit of writing.

Posted by Anita Mac on 05/27/10 at 11:52 PM

& I'm left stunned & gasping. This is awesome.

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