| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/15/10 at 03:30 PM What a great build-up to those last four lines. The whole thing was just superb. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/15/10 at 07:14 PM Very nice write James. It is the time of year although it happens all the time. Well done. |
| Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 04/15/10 at 10:03 PM Hey there james! Good poem, the first stanza sets it all up very nicely and the rest follows on queue, well done. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/16/10 at 01:59 AM ... an excellent write..... |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 02:51 AM How lovely and charming! |
