|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/15/10 at 03:30 PM|
What a great build-up to those last four lines. The whole thing was just superb.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 04/15/10 at 07:14 PM|
Very nice write James. It is the time of year although it happens all the time. Well done.
|Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 04/15/10 at 10:03 PM|
Hey there james! Good poem, the first stanza sets it all up very nicely and the rest follows on queue, well done.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/16/10 at 01:59 AM|
... an excellent write.....
|Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 02:51 AM|
How lovely and charming!