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Just A Guy Talking to A girl

by James Zealy

No special lines
No verbal chess moves
Just a guy talking to a girl

Its a simple and elegant dance
Of conversant adjectives intersecting
Its a guy discovering a girl

Animated interchange of ideas
Tease and stimulate spheres of intellect
That evokes emotions of a guy for this girl

Verbal fore play that enlightens
Intensity of emotions catalyze
Soft caresses by this guy with this girl

Gentle relaxed intensity that builds
With each loving touch
When her guy and his girl become one

Pleasure and intellect weave
Seductive brush strokes
That paint a picture of two souls

Telling stories that beget
Experiences of life games
Fought and won together

Torrid emotional angst
Spilled in button pushing
Wars sullying respect

Forgiveness amid sins of the two
Levy a sense of weaknesses understood
As this guy understands this girl

Conflicted stubborn and proud
They understand each fits
And complements what each lacks

A waltz that appears
Deceptively effortless
Is choreographed together

By this guy and that girl


Posted on 04/15/2010
Copyright © 2021 James Zealy

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/15/10 at 03:30 PM

What a great build-up to those last four lines. The whole thing was just superb.

Posted by George Hoerner on 04/15/10 at 07:14 PM

Very nice write James. It is the time of year although it happens all the time. Well done.

Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 04/15/10 at 10:03 PM

Hey there james! Good poem, the first stanza sets it all up very nicely and the rest follows on queue, well done.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/16/10 at 01:59 AM

... an excellent write.....

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 02:51 AM

How lovely and charming!

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