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YOU ARE SO BEAUTIFUL (2)

by W. Mahlon Purdin

What others may not see in their rush
I see every day, I see every time, you walk by.
The scars, the bruises, the broken dreams
Only refining, defining moments
That deepened and deepen you
Like a writer enriching a character
Or a painter mixing new colors
Or a conductor digging out a
More vibrant performance from one who
Might be holding back.
It's like an athlete calling for more effort,
Or a teacher drawing out a student's best,
Or a friend standing by no matter what.
I see all of those in just you looking at a menu
Wondering what to order.

Your beauty is so astounding,
So amazing, so astonishing
Its brightness takes concentration
To see clearly, not through smoke and mirrors,
But through a clarity with such a sharp focus
That some are confused and some are dazed
Seeing something like that.

The years have given me
A proficiency,
In seeing your beauty.
And I would share it with others
If you would let me.

If you would believe me.

07/16/2008

Posted on 03/23/2010
Copyright © 2026 W. Mahlon Purdin

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