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old money hanging over our heads

by Ava Blu



she delights in his silence, the various seasons passing through them cause much pain gnats fly around and they are running from the weeds, they are not living alone anymore and they are weeping for all the reasons why waking up tomorrow in the arms of one another could be so right.

03/19/2010

Posted on 03/19/2010
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/19/10 at 03:47 PM

This is such a strange, wonderful image. It manages a pretty flawless mix of weird and beautiful. I especially love the bit about the gnats. It builds to that terrific closing line and connects the whole thing right down to the wire.

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