beneath the lonely cry of gulls
by Jim Benz
entails sand, blue sky,
and a tide that lifts
shared laughter to the height
Author's Note: dreaming of summer tanka. or maybe just dreaming.
Posted on 03/10/2010
Copyright © 2022 Jim Benz
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Julie Adams on 03/15/10 at 04:41 PM|
had to rate this highly, cuz ur imagery, ideas, and selective word choice dance on the air your poem provides, a pleasure to read you again Jim, peace, jewels
|Posted by Julie Adams on 03/15/10 at 04:42 PM|
ps: I love laughing to the height/ of nakedness -- a fantastic image and idea, so fresh but crystal clear...lovely!