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balancing [2-27-2010]

by Ava Blu


i am dangerous and damaged i am wrinkled i am wavering like a wilting flower i am waiting i am wondering like a curling wave
i am just trying to get by.

03/01/2010

Posted on 03/01/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/01/10 at 04:26 PM

Another one that so beautifully and eloquently sums up the theme of this month. The imagery and tone of those first five lines each feel like a ghost with entirely too much to say.

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