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balancing [2-24-2010]

by Ava Blu


you never seem to be far away enough you never seem to hug me at the most vulnerable moment and we are no longer taking pictures of the snow and we are no longer using our birthday wishes on each other
and we are over.

02/24/2010

Posted on 02/25/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/25/10 at 03:22 PM

You have such a gift for making these thoughts so sharp, so painful. Your honesty here is coupled with the usual brilliant lines to make something that is quiet yet brutal and absolutely unforgettable.

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