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Unbreakable

by Becca Morton

just let her dreams soar
she'll never know how to want more
she's unbreakable.

02/24/2010

Posted on 02/24/2010
Copyright © 2024 Becca Morton

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/24/10 at 04:34 PM

Sounds like a good introduction to something bigger. I'd love to see this developed further.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/24/10 at 08:20 PM

I wish I was unbreakable- unfortunately, I consider myself UNREPAIRABLE! Great write. You said a lot in an economy of words. Thanks- good read.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/25/10 at 07:45 PM

...economy o' words...and joan is REPAIRABLE...love this work.

Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/22/11 at 03:38 PM

This is so full of possibilities...a wonderful poem.

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