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balancing [2-22-2010]

by Ava Blu


she had me add to the list of things i want when she dies she said i had too little, not enough of value
but she has been the value and her things, these things that may be worth thousands, will not hug me will not be excited to see me when i visit and i cannot love a thing the way i love my mother.

02/22/2010

Posted on 02/23/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/23/10 at 09:14 PM

I would give anything for a longer version of this.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/23/10 at 09:15 PM

Blast it. What I was also going to say was that there is such a universe of emotion, story and life in just these short, beautifully versed stanzas. There has been so much depth to this February series, even more than usual. Wow and wow again. Well done.

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