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balancing [2-21-2010]

by Ava Blu


i did not mean to forget to say good-bye but maybe it's true that you heard it anyway, you heard it at the end of the street as i drove away
and we started stumbling between this night and tomorrow and i don't want to drive back i am ashamed.

02/21/2010

Posted on 02/23/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/23/10 at 09:01 PM

I love the hell out of that first stanza. This has such a great form and flow to it.

Posted by Julie Adams on 03/14/10 at 02:47 PM

this folder begs you to return again and again, a saga that calls to you, a box of truffles you can't help but savor again and again

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