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balancing [2-19-2010]

by Ava Blu


we did not sit around discussing the scars on your arms for no reason we did not look at the dying garden in your backyard just because we could we were not ready for this we were not ready to have a breakdown,
to have our foundation rattling,
to have our neighbors call the cops

no, we were probably never really meant to be here.

02/19/2010

Posted on 02/20/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/21/10 at 12:17 AM

The last three lines that build to that final one have to be some of the best work in the February series, and that's taking some pretty impressive poetic competition into consideration.

Posted by Julie Adams on 03/14/10 at 02:42 PM

I love this folder, this series...they feel like slices of life, and I can never have enough of yours, kudos...peace to u poet...jewels xoxox

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