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balancing [2-18-2010]
by Ava Blu
there's something that should be said about
people who live in someone else's backseat,
people who point their fingers
and laugh at the most inappropriate times.
there is something inside of us all that should be said
in front of a stranger's mirror,
and we, when we discover we wanted to drive instead,
we will point the finger at ourselves
but no one will be looking.
02/18/2010
Posted on 02/19/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 02/19/10 at 05:10 AM The last three lines struck me as a little bit awkward, but everything leading up to them was excellent. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/19/10 at 10:25 PM I'm gonna have to disagree with Vince on this one. I thought those last three lines were pretty powerhouse stuff. It's the kind of piece that begs for a good spoken word setting. |
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