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balancing [2-11-2010]

by Ava Blu


when i say good-bye,
when i tuck your love letter inside my jacket,
you will know i mean it.

02/11/2010

Posted on 02/12/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Beth K Hannah on 02/12/10 at 08:11 PM

this made my heartache. Simple effective great.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/13/10 at 12:39 PM

I gotta go with Beth on this one. It says a lot that such a simple line makes me wish I could cry.

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