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today

by George Hoerner

there is no warmth
today it seems the sun shines
right on through my soul

02/11/2010

Posted on 02/11/2010
Copyright © 2024 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/11/10 at 03:01 PM

...no pun at all intended, this is too cool !

Posted by Therese Elaine on 02/11/10 at 03:23 PM

I'm with Charlie...what a delicately chill piece of writing this is...though I hope you can get warm soon, literally and metaphorically!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/11/10 at 06:13 PM

I really liked this piece. The flow is great- you'll get warm soon.

Posted by Alisa Js on 03/22/10 at 09:28 PM

Hi George.. I have felt this way before, emotionally speaking. Isn't is amazing how strong emotions can be? Thank you for sharing... alisa ;-)

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