every lovely moment

by Maria Francesca

every lovely moment
burns through me

every smile
every sigh
every sultry kiss
grinds my bones

chills my skin
stings my eyes

injures me now that you're gone
in ways no fist could ever do


Posted on 02/11/2010
Copyright © 2020 Maria Francesca

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 02/11/10 at 12:43 PM

Such a lovely little piece this morning lady. Oh and how what is no more has such power.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/11/10 at 01:51 PM

Gorgeous attention to form and language. Very nice.

Posted by Therese Elaine on 02/11/10 at 03:21 PM

They say it fades in time -and it does -but it causes a hell of an ache on the way out...lovely tribute to those pains Maria, done with a grace and beauty that few can muster during such times.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/21/10 at 07:45 PM

I want to say something different besides, I love this. But, I LOVE this. You perfectly prepare and lead the reader to those awesome last lines! Fantastic!

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