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balancing [2-10-2010]

by Ava Blu


i saw my legs wrapped around you in the way you wanted them to be, in the way you needed me
i saw you follow me into the bathroom in the distance someone was weeping, in the distance someone needed my face
i saw it all end with a shot of some new drink you created and i don't know why i came.

02/10/2010

Posted on 02/11/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/11/10 at 01:42 AM

There's something quite haunting about this one. It reads like a memory fifty, sixty years old that's still as painful to put away as it was only minutes after it was committed to the mind. I'd venture to say this is the best of the month so far.

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